Hilarious as ever. This part had much a slower pace (obviously anything following a runaway car/murderous Vikings on hallucinogens is going to slow down by its very nature, or Substack itself might explode). Who in the F is the couple falling out of the cupboard? lol
Thank you so much for the shoutout! I really enjoyed what I’ve read of the Four Orders series, but I haven’t made it to part 5 yet. I skipped to the bottom of this post so I wouldn’t spoil anything!
Morning, Ben. I think rather than a Haiku, yours is a Senryu. They are about the human existence and frailties. Haiku is nature-based. I love your stuff!
Entropy, gotta love it. I'd say that time and space are borked.
And two more people show up in the black hole.
Hilarious as ever. This part had much a slower pace (obviously anything following a runaway car/murderous Vikings on hallucinogens is going to slow down by its very nature, or Substack itself might explode). Who in the F is the couple falling out of the cupboard? lol
Thanks so much. Honest answer is I have no idea who they are yet!
Thank you so much for the shoutout! I really enjoyed what I’ve read of the Four Orders series, but I haven’t made it to part 5 yet. I skipped to the bottom of this post so I wouldn’t spoil anything!
You’re welcome. Absolutely love your microfiction.
Morning, Ben. I think rather than a Haiku, yours is a Senryu. They are about the human existence and frailties. Haiku is nature-based. I love your stuff!
Ah! And there I was just thinking I was a rule breaker! Thanks so much.
You are so very welcome. Only too happy to help a fellow writer.